This is a really nice concept, but the presentation could be better
It's very noticiable that 'ookami' and the player are heavily traced; and the school uniforms that the girls wear stings the eye a bit
My personal opinion is that it would be nice if you could romance all the players in the game, but to not do so feels like an intentional choice from the designer so it's alright.
Overall the art needs improvement and the gamplay needs to be expanded upon but the writing is very nicely crafted :)